Have you ever had one of those nights?
One of those moments when you just get enough and you want to scream at the top of your lungs.
When you hit the wall and have a breakdown.
I've had those moments but I don't scream, I just cry until I feel like my insides were turned inside out Very powerful image, however this time the use of dark contour lines actually hurts the piece, mainly because the female figure is so heavily outlines that it contradicts all of your wonderful shading, it makes her look very flat. Playing with line width can add variety as well as visual interest so that's a tip for future pieces ^^ But overall I like this idea and you have a good sense of light and shadow. Keep up the good work!
I didn't think about it, but you're really right about the heavy lines. Unfortunately ink pens don't go any smaller than 0.1 that I know of. Downside of working in a small format. ^_^' I will however think about what you've said next time. Maybe a bigger paper, or just skip the ink altogether.
I like the background and the black and white; looks really cool! One thing I did notice is the shading around the woman's feet and the couch; it should perhaps look longer on something, to give the floor a flatter angle. Other than that, really awesome!
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i sure have those times..all the time
love the tv and the shadows..
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